This is my first post in the blog so, let me
familiarize myself to you all first. I am a freshman at Islington College doing
an undergraduate course of IT computing. I completed my high school from United
Academy and currently stay at Chhetrapati. I love reading books and prefer
listening to music and playing guitar to freshen up my mind.
Being born in a middle-class Nepalese family, hard
work, discipline and dedication were the only things I was taught. Having consistently performed
well in my school, I believe that "life without cause is life without
effect". Besides studying, I do love partaking in extracurricular
activities. I even performed in a band during my high school. So, I am a pretty
fun loving person.
After passing my high school, I had plenty of
options to choose as my career but since I had a deep interest in computers
from my schooldays, I decided to make my career in the same field. I had
always been keen to know how computers worked. The world of electronic
art always fascinated me. During school, I was pretty good at Computer Science
as well. The passion and eagerness to try out something new was always there in
me. When I heard about IT and its scope from my teachers and elders, I got
more interested in it and started to see clear image of myself in the same
field. I specially have interest in software than hardware that's why I
chose this field of IT computing.
Furthermore, I don't just want to work in
Nepal but also compete globally. I want to achieve something great
and become a source of inspiration for everyone in this field. I hope I
would be successful in achieving my goal by ample endeavor and
following the path shown by Islington College.
I would have loved if you had given some reasons for your decision on choosing Islington College. And I think it would have been better if the topic was "About myself and..." instead of "Me and...". Those are for constructive criticisms. Apart from that, I think the whole thing is well put. You have clearly given a brief information about yourself and your reasons for choosing IT. You have got a good arsenal of vocabulary as well. And I love that you have recognized your potential and the fact that you want to achieve something great in IT field is worth commending. Keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteThe first paragraph seem just bland so do work on it. The second para is way better but I still would ask you to work on the blog as it can clearly be made better.
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